The oldest genetic memories showed her people at war with the Tunnelers, and she was one of their best warriors, until she met him. Swept up in the energy of love, she soon found herself with child. Desperate to find a safe haven in lands that know only war, Seraph and her mate flee from one war zone to the next. Desperation increasing as the time to become a mother grows closer, she finds an ally in the most unexpected of places, and possibly hope for a safe haven.
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